I went to my friend's house. I went with my friend to the library.I played with him. We played basketball. My friend beat me. Then I drop him off at his house. After that I went home.
Thursday, 6 June 2013
Friday, 31 May 2013
Should Children eat lollies?
Writing an argument:
Statement: “Children should eat lollies”
Do you agree or disagree?
Use the table to help you with your decision:
Children should eat lollies because...
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Children should not eat lollies because...
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1
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it tastes good
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you will get sore teeth
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2
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it makes you feel great
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you might get sick
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3
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kids like it
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it will make you fat
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4
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lollies are hard and soft
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make your tummy sore
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5
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some lollies have different flavours
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Its not good for you
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I think that children should eat lollies because it tastes good.
I think that children should eat lollies because it makes you feel great
I think that children should eat lollies because kids like it
I think that children should eat lollies because lollies are hard and soft
I think that children should eat lollies because some lollies have different
flavours
I think that Children should not eat lollies because you will get sore teeth
I think that Children should not eat lollies because you might get sick
I think that Children should not eat lollies because it will make you fat
I think that Children should not eat lollies because make your tummy sore
I think that Children should not eat lollies because Its not good for you
Friday, 10 May 2013
Will.i.am came to school
(Written with help from Kingston P)
Monday, 8 April 2013
My weekend
In the weekend I went to the library.
I went to the library with my friend
His name is william
Friday, 5 April 2013
Easter
I went to my grandma’s house. We went to celebrate Easter with my family. I got
an Easter egg from my aunty.
Labels:
Easter,
Easter bunny,
Jesse,
Pt England,
room 21,
Term 1,
wrting
Friday, 22 March 2013
Old man at the beach
The old man is walking on the beach.
He saw his family in the distance and he was happy. The waves washed against his pants.
(Jesse wrote this with some help from Marvin and Darius)
Friday, 15 March 2013
assembly
On Friday we had a cool assembly. We saw this man singing and he was Miss Muliaumaseali'i’s brother.
I saw a man singing. I saw Mr Burt.
The kids were clapping.
The kids were watching.
The kids were singing.
(Completed with help from the teacher)
I saw a man singing. I saw Mr Burt.
The kids were clapping.
The kids were watching.
The kids were singing.
(Completed with help from the teacher)
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